Some synths could use tuning, these smooth chords entering at 30 seconds should be pitched down a few cents. I also don't like the sound design choices, the elements used here differ in their quality. That bass is a bit muffled. A lot of these synths just don't fit together that well, for instance the synth at 1 minute. That break change at around 2 and a half minutes doesn't feel that well, the track loses its grooviness in a very quick way, perhaps some more low-end on the new break could've made it better. Some of the changes of pace in this song don't work, and it's all too steppy and quickly done.
I liked the general vibe of it and the breaks are nice, along with the sound effects and mixing. But the problems with pace and fitting sounds together need to be addressed. This track has potential, though, and I liked its main idea and what was it trying to achieve. Good luck in the future!